Very well constructed
Congratulations on a beautiful piece of work. The entire story was very well put together with a perfect times for the story to escalate and decline (pressure, humor, drama, ect). The script was solid and really makes you think of whats really goin on in those offices. The screenplay is beautiful with great taste in directing. The art seemed to have alot of minimalist influence; it works very well with the story and how simple it is. The sound was good but some of the voices could have been better, particularily with the two characters in the factory but everyone else's voices were very fresh. The interactivity though small had quite an impact through the filter of the viewer-author lense, the loading screen and the ending really had alot to say. The violence can be counted as the mental damage on the one character which defines pretty much the whole short. Beautiful work, I feel ashamed I didn't see the others before this one.